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Tuesday 13 November 2018
Camp writing
HI my name is lesieli and this is my Camp writing. enjoy
Hi Lesieli. My name is Joyce I am in Room 23. I really like your post. Maybe you could add a little bit more information and spelling but very good. If you would like to come visit my blog here is the link http://odsjoyces.blogspot.com/blog you later.
Hello Lesieli I really wanted to read your camp story and I really enjoyed it. I think you should add more words that are a little bit more describing. If you visit my blog I would add more comments to your blog. Here is my link https://odspavan.blogspot.com/ Blog you later (Pavan/Room 7)
hi its Eli from room 8 I liked your camp writing but just so you know you spelled went wrong the first time
ReplyDeleteHi Lesieli. My name is Joyce I am in Room 23. I really like your post. Maybe you could add a little bit more information and spelling but very good. If you would like to come visit my blog here is the link http://odsjoyces.blogspot.com/blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHello Lesieli I really wanted to read your camp story and I really enjoyed it. I think you should add more words that are a little bit more describing.
ReplyDeleteIf you visit my blog I would add more comments to your blog. Here is my link
https://odspavan.blogspot.com/
Blog you later
(Pavan/Room 7)